英语改错帮我看看有没有写错的地方,或者帮我修改下好的会追分的thereisacommomsocialphenomenonthatparentstoospoiltheirchildrensothattheyhandleall.Thatmakeschildrencannotindepedently.AsfarasIanconcerned

　　英语改错

　　帮我看看有没有写错的地方,或者帮我修改下

　　好的会追分的

　　thereisacommomsocialphenomenonthatparentstoospoiltheirchildrensothattheyhandleall.Thatmakeschildrencannotindepedently.

　　AsfarasIanconcerned,parentsshouldknowthedisadvantagesfaroutweightheadvantagesiftheygivechildrentoomuchlove.what'smore,itisofutmostimportancethatparentsrepeattheirmistakesasaremindertochildrenofthedepthsoftheirstupidity.Thatmakeschildrenknowwhatisrightandwhatiswrong.Besides,childrenalsoshouldlearntoliveontheirown,suchasdoingsomewashing,cleaningbythemselvesondailylife.