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  请英语语法高手帮忙修改一下两篇短文!急用!以下两篇!感激不尽!OberonandTitaniaaccuseeachotherofbeingdisloyalisbecausetheyarejealousyanduntrustofeachother,thiscausedtheirquarrel.Althoughbothofthemwantto

  请英语语法高手帮忙修改一下两篇短文!急用!

  以下两篇!感激不尽!

  OberonandTitaniaaccuseeachotherofbeingdisloyalisbecausetheyarejealousyanduntrustofeachother,thiscausedtheirquarrel.Althoughbothofthemwanttobeascendantinthequarrel,thewayhowtheydealtheissueisverydifferent.Firstofall,Oberon,thekingthefairies,heisaselfishpersonanddonotcareaboutotherpeople'sthoughts.HethoughtTitaniatakesaninterestonTheseus,inordertorevengeTitania,hebroughtalotdisasterstothefairiesland,suchasunseasonableweather,theimaginativepathsinthegrassgrowoverfromlackofuseandpeoplesufferfromarthritis.Hedothingswithhisfeeling.Hisjealousyandselfishnessletthoseinnocentpeopletobeartheconsequences.Furthermore,inordertogettheIndianprincefromTitania,heharmedTitania.Hewantedtomakeherfallinlovewithawildanimal.Heactswithoutthinkingandlogicmakeshimimmature.Therefore,Oberon'saccusationstowardsTitaniaareunforgivableandmoredamning.Ontheotherhand,Titania,thequeenofthefairiesland.ThoughshethoughtOberontakesaninterstonHippolyta,sheneverdosomethingexcessivetorevengeOberon.Also,TitaniashowedsympathytotheIndianprince,forexampleshecrownstheboywithflowersanddelightsinhim.Heractionsshowthatsheisakindandgenerousperson.WhenTitaniaknewthatOberonwantedtokepttheIndianprince,sherefusedhisrequestandignoredhisactions.ThisfurthershowsTitania'smaturityandrationality.Inconclusion,sinceTitaniaiskindandgenerousandOberonisselfish,Titania'saccusationsaremorebelievableandforgivable.

  HelenaassumesthatLysander,DemetriusandHermiaconspiredtomockherbecausesheisunconfidenttoherself.Beforetheplaybegins,DemetriusabandonsHelenabycourtingHermia.ShethoughtsheisuglywhencomparestoHermia.SheconsidersthephysicalappearanceasthereasonwhyshelostDemetriustoHermia.ShecannotleaveherfeelingtowardDemetriusbehind,andshecannotwipeDemetrius'vowsofffromthememory.Helenaalsobelievesthatonsomeday,DemetriuswillbetiredandwearyofHermia,andhislovewillbacktoher.sosherisksasecondcourtshipwithDemetrius.Astheplaygoeson,DemetriusisunconcernedandevenlosetempertoHelena.Helenaissti

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李艳红

  你的文章整体没有太大问题.我是复制了你的文章之后直接在上面修改的,首先是时态一致问题,第一篇我全部改用现在时态,第二篇用了过去时态.我觉得都可以用,只是在使用的时候要一致;其次还改了一些语法错误;至于用词问...

2020-03-02 20:15:56

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