帮我改改英文作文我作了一篇文,是要考口试的,大家看看能不能帮我修改一下.我知道有些地方有点错.开头结尾和为什麽喜欢圣诞节对不对.还有,我写的顺序有没错?MyfavouritefestivalMyfavouritefe
帮我改改英文作文
我作了一篇文,是要考口试的,大家看看能不能帮我修改一下.我知道有些地方有点错.开头结尾和为什麽喜欢圣诞节对不对.还有,我写的顺序有没错?
Myfavouritefestival
MyfavouritefestivalisChristmas.Itisonthe25thofDecemberofeveryyear.Christmasdayholidayhave14day,Iamhappy.
AtChristmasnight,mymotheralsocooktraditionalChristmasfood,
suchasturkeyandChristmaspudding.MyfamilyandIcelebrateChristmaseveryyear.
DuringChristmasholiday,myfamilyandIgoonajourneywegoonajourneyinChina,notgoingabroad.Christmasholidaylastday,Idomyhomeworkandrevision,atthetime,Iamregret.Anyway,IlikeChristmas,becauseChristmasholidayis14day.IlikeChristmas,IChristmaseveryday.