LastSundayIwashelpingmyfatherinhisteahousewhenaforeignvisitorenteredin.IgreetedherwithawarmlysmileandtalkedwithherinEnglish.Theyounglady,whocalledherJudy,camefromCanada.shetoldmethatitwasthefirsttimeshehas
LastSundayIwashelpingmyfatherinhisteahousewhenaforeignvisitorenteredin.IgreetedherwithawarmlysmileandtalkedwithherinEnglish.Theyounglady,whocalledherJudy,camefromCanada.shetoldmethatitwasthefirsttimeshehasbeeninChinaandsofarshehadenjoinedherstaythere.Allthepeopleshemetinthecountrywerefriendlyforher.InthelateafternoonIshowedheraroundourtown.Aftersheleft,Judythankedmeformykind.Besides,shepraisedmeformyspokenEnglish.
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