【小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?Goodbye,primaryschool.Iwillleaveyousoon.Iwillmissyouforever.Goodbye,dearteachers,thankyouforteachingmeforsixyears.WhenIwasdown,youencouragedmeandcomfortedme.Yout】

　　小孩写篇作文,不知道语法（句型）等有没有错误?

　　Goodbye,primaryschool.Iwillleaveyousoon.Iwillmissyouforever.

　　Goodbye,dearteachers,thankyouforteachingmefor

　　sixyears.WhenIwasdown,youencouragedmeandcomfortedme.Youtoldme,”don’t

　　beproud!”whenIsucceeded.

　　Goodbye,dearclassmates,thankyouforbeingwithme

　　forsixyears.Thankyouforbringingmejoyandhappiness.Whichmademebecame

　　livelyandcheerful.

　　Goodbye,dearplayground,yourecordedmy

　　passions.Goodbye,dearflowersandtrees,youbroughtmeagoodmoodeveryday

　　andagoodlearningenvironment.

　　Goodbye,primaryschool.Iamleavingyou,butyouwillalwaysstayinmyheart.