【急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!Inthisdayandage,manyfamilieshaveonlyonechildwhoistheappleoftheirparents.Thesechildrenoftenlackofresponsibility.Corporalpunishmentonstudentsw】

　　急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!

　　Inthisdayandage,manyfamilieshaveonlyonechildwhoistheappleoftheirparents.Thesechildrenoftenlackofresponsibility.Corporalpunishmentonstudentswhetheritshouldbebecomesahottopicintheseyears.

　　Manychildrencannotaffordthatself-controlandtodistinguishrightfromwrong.SomechildrenspendmostoftheirtimewatchingTVorplaygames.Theydonotthemselveshomework.Thuscorporalpunishmentisnecessary.Childrenneedtodevelopgoodhabitsofcorporalpunishment.

　　Corporalpunishmentwouldadverselyaffectthechild.Firstly,ageofthechildisstillsmall,theywouldbecomeintrovertedpersonalityofcorporalpunishment.Second,childrenmaybecomerebelliousgoastray.

　　Inthefinalanalysis,Iconcedethatgivechildrentherightguidanceandsomeofcorporalpunishmentontheirbetter.whetherparentsandteachersorthecommunitywantchildrentogrowuphealthyandhappy.