1.Alongwiththesocialdevelopment,moreandmoreproblemsareexposedtooureyes,amongwhichoneisthattheoveruseofthecomputersmakesthesocialabilitiesofthepeopledecrease.
2.Fristofall,thescientistsalongwiththeartists,suchasmerchants,linguists,authors,historistsandphilosophersmakeequalcontributetooursociety.
3.Secondly(Whatismore如果你要是写作文的话,就用括号里的)theoveruseofthemoderntechologiesleadustoexhaustioninsteadofrelaxation.
4.Soitiseasyforustoconcludethattheuniversitiesshouldadoptequalnumbersofmaleandfemalestudentsifwetakeittoconsideration.
5.Fromallabove,wecanconcludethatthecommercialprofessionalsshouldbesupportedbyourcountrybecausetheyplayanimportantroleindevelopingourcountry.
6.Asforme,theworstaspectofthisphenomenonisthatjobsputongreatpressurestopeople,whichisgraduallyerodingtheirmentalhealth.