求高手帮忙看看英文的自我介绍?.请帮忙修改错误地方!面试要用的.所以请保证正确率.看看哪里有语法或用词错误!Goodafternoon,mymaneisXX.TodayIparticipatethisinterview.Firstiwanttosaythankyouforg

　　求高手帮忙看看英文的自我介绍?.请帮忙修改错误地方!

　　面试要用的.所以请保证正确率.

　　看看哪里有语法或用词错误!

　　Goodafternoon,mymaneisXX.TodayIparticipatethisinterview.Firstiwanttosaythankyouforgivingmethechance.Itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunityfortheinterview,iwouldliketoanswerwhateveryoumayraise,andihopeicanmakeagoodperformancetoday.Nowiwillintroducemyselfbriefly.Iama19-year-oldgrilwhowouldgraduatefromshanghainanhuvocationalschoolin2009,myspecialtyisAviationservice.Ispentabout3yearstolearnsththatiwouldneedintheworkinthefuture.Suchaselectrionicticket,securitycheck,andanythingelseandsoon.Intheschoolmynearlyallschoolrecordwasfine.Besides,ihavegotmanydiplomabefore.Theyareallwritedinmyresume.Allofthesewascreditedtomyearnest.Inaddition,iamapersonwhohasresponsibilityandconscientious.Generallyspeaking,iamahardworkingstudentespeciallydothethingiaminterestedin.Iwilltrymybesttomakeitperfectnomatterhowdifficultitis.

　　可以顺便提供我些.自我介绍比较好的句子.用词的.或可以涉及写的方面.