马上要研究生面试了,请英语一级棒的大湿们帮我修改下自我介绍,本身写的不好,但也望您高抬贵手!Goodmorning,mydearteachers,Iamgladtobehereforthisinterview.MynameisXXX,Iam23yearsold.IcomeformZhang

　　马上要研究生面试了,请英语一级棒的大湿们帮我修改下自我介绍,本身写的不好,但也望您高抬贵手!

　　Goodmorning,mydearteachers,Iamgladtobehereforthisinterview.MynameisXXX,Iam23yearsold.IcomeformZhangjiajie,whereChina’sfirstNationalForestParklocatedin(这个定语从句我写对了吗?--)IwillfinishmyundergraduateeducationinYYUniversityinjuly,thisyear.Andnow,IamtryingmybestforobtainingachancetodofutherstudyinYYUniversity.(我是想强调我是YY大学毕业的,想考本校研究生!您觉得不好可以帮我换个表达方式)

　　Generallyspeaking,IamahardworkingstudentespeciallydothethingIaminterestedin.AfterImakeupmymind,Iwilltrymybesttofinishitnomatterhowdifficultitis.WhenIwassophomore,Ifoundeditionofpicturesveryinteresting,soIlearnedPhotoshopbymyselfveryhard.Andaferstayingwithmypersonalcomputerforhalfamonth,Iwasabletomakepicturesmorebeautifulandevendreamlike.(我是想说我能把图片处理的更漂亮甚至达到梦幻般的效果,不知道表达是否有误)

　　Well,inmysparetime,Ilikebasketball,badmintonandclimbing,alsoenglishismyfavorite.Sometimes,IgotoEnglishcornertopractisemyoralEnglish,butIknowmyEnglishisnotgoodenough,Iwillcontiunestuding.

　　That’sall,thankyouforyourattention!