dearjane
Iwasshockedhowisgoingaboutyou?Manyyearsagoyoucametomyhometownfoundthatitisverypoorandtheenvironmentisverybad,garbagewaseverywhere.butnowIwillhappytotellyouthatmyhometownisnotdertyanymore,ithaveabigchange.
first,thefactorymadetheairpollutisdispeer,peoplegrowmanytreesanthemountain,nowitisverybeautiful.second,penopledidnotgetthestrangillanymore,andtheylivedhappely.themoreimportantispeople'sawareofprotecttheenvironmentisstrengthen,theywillmoreloveourhometownthanbefor.
Wherecomeyoutocomebacktovisitmyhometown,youwillamarzethechangeofit.Iwliiwaitingforyourcoming.
YoursLliHua
这个对付高中作文应该是没问题了,但是希望你以后能自己多练习,老师留作业的目的是提高你的能力而不是应付交差哦最后会害了自己
要把作文分拿高你可以把我写的一些词语换掉例如people有很多可以代替的村民什么的这样会提高你的作文质量字要写工整也很重要加油.
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