【帮帮看看我的英文自我介绍.谢谢看看有没有问题..Helloeverybody….howareyoudoingtoday.I'mgladtointroducemyselfbriefly.Firstofall.myEnglishnameisaxis.iamfifteen.yearsold.I'manoutgoingboy.iloveEnglis】

　　帮帮看看我的英文自我介绍.谢谢

　　看看有没有问题..

　　Helloeverybody….howareyoudoingtoday.I'mgladtointroducemyselfbriefly.Firstofall.myEnglishnameisaxis.iamfifteen.yearsold.I'manoutgoingboy.iloveEnglishandIlikespeakingEnglish.idowellininternationaltechnology.SoIwanttobeskillfulinIT.Iinterstedinplaygames..suchaselectrongamesandsportsgame..ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.

　　Iamcomefromnanjingforignlanguageschool..ididabadworkinmylifeofthiseightgrade..soIwantdomybestinthisschool..

　　就这两个地方么