请大家帮我看下这篇对话语法是有错误.我想根据《假话真情》那个小品改成一个英语话剧.下面是我翻译的一部分.请大家我帮我看看是否与语法错误?TrueliesFigures(人物)：Father：Tom（T）Daughte

　　请大家帮我看下这篇对话语法是有错误.

　　我想根据《假话真情》那个小品改成一个英语话剧.下面是我翻译的一部分.请大家我帮我看看是否与语法错误?

　　Truelies

　　Figures(人物)：

　　Father：Tom（T）Daughter:Susan(S)

　　Littledaughter:Jenny(J)Son:Michel(M)

　　Aside(旁白)Onasunnymorning,oldTomissittinginawheelchair.Heseemstobesad.

　　T:ThoughIamsittinginawheelchair.Iamquitefine.Mylegsareasstrongastwentyyearsago.Youmayaskedwhyyoudothat.Agreatquestion.Ihavetwodraughts,Susan,JennyandasonMichel.Susanisateacher.Jennyisasinger.AndMichelisanownerofashop.Someoneusuallysaystome,“Tom,youaresoluckytohavesomanykids.Andallofthemareverysuccessfulintheirownfields.”ButIfeellonelynowandthen.Theyhaven’tvisitedmeforhundredsofyears.WhatIneedisquitesimple.Iwantthemtostaywithme,haveasmalltalk,watchtv,haveameal.andsoon.It’swonderful.Bytheway,todayismybirthday.Ibettheyhavenoideaaboutthat.Theycompletelyforgetit.yes,theyarebusy.Busy….So,Ipretendtobeillandgivethemacall.IwillmakethemcryastheyseeIamsittinginawheelchair.Itmustbeagreatsurprise.Hahaha….

　　Aside:Susaniscoming...hurriedlywithtearsinherface.

　　S:Dad,Dad,what’sthematterwithyou?Areyouok?Howdoyousitinawheelchair?What’swrongwithyourlegs?

　　T:(pretendtobesad)I‘mfine.Susan.It‘sjustaboutmyleg.Oneofthemisbroken.Isorrytobotheryou,lknowyouarebusy…..

　　S:Dad,please,Don’tsaythat.Iamsorry…Howcanyoustandup,dad?(surprise)

　　T:Yeah,HowcanIstandup?

　　Aside:Micheliscominghurriedly.

　　M:Dad,dad,what’sthematterwithyoulegs?Howdoyousitinawheelchair.

　　S;Dad’slegisbroken,Michel.

　　S&M.:Dad,Dad.(cry…..)

　　T:(暗乐道)Yes,bingo.

　　M：Butwhereisyourtheotherleg?

　　T：Goodquestion.Ican’tfindit,too.Comeon,Whereismyleg?Whocutitofffrommybody.Oh,myGod.

　　S:Wait,dad,It’syouleghere.Justunderyoubody.

　　T:Thankgoodness.Ifinditatlast.

　　M:Takeitout,Dad.IsitfalseOh,Jesus,It’samazing.

　　Aside:Jennyiscomingtoo,withtearsinherface.

　　J:Dad,dad,What’sthematterwithyourlegs?Howdoyousitinawheelchair?What’s