【帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿Goodmorning,everyone!Mynameis__________,I’mnineyearsold.IstudyinMABUschool.I’mahappygirl,Ihavemanyhobbies.Suchas:reading,painting,singing.Iliketoeatmeat.ButIdon’tlikefishat】
帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿
Goodmorning,everyone!Mynameis__________,I’mnineyearsold.IstudyinMABUschool.
I’mahappygirl,Ihavemanyhobbies.Suchas:reading,painting,singing.Iliketoeatmeat.ButIdon’tlikefishatall.Ilikegreen.AndIhavemanyfriends.
I’magoodschoolgirlinteachers’eyes!Myschoolissonice.Ihavemanyteachers.AndIlikemyteachers.Ofcourse,IlikeEnglishbest.Ihaveahappyfamily.Mymotheralwayssaystome:oh,you’reacutegirl!
Thereare______peopleinmyfamily.Mydadisaworker.Mymotherisaworkertoo.AndIhaveaalittlebrother.hisname's______.healwaysplaywithme.AndIalsolovehim.Heisveryfunny,oneday,healwaysdrinkwater,Iaskhe:“whydoyoudrinksomuchwater?”Hesaid:“Ihavejusthadanapple!”Istillcan’tunderstandhe,thenhetellme:“Iforgottowashtheapple!”
Thisismyfamily.Doyoulikeus?
That'sall.Thankyou!
我英语太差,主要是后面半截啊,逻辑啊,语法啊,不要改难了,小孩能力有限,能生动而简单是最好了的!
各位辛苦了,你们的意见都很好.知道有点过分,但能够改好了让我复制就行吗?