看看有没有语法错误Hallo,mynameisDavid,I’ma16-year-oldboy,IwasborninSeptemberthethirtieth,nineteenninety.IalwaysspeakChineseatschoolandathome,butIhavesecondlanguage,thisisEnglish.Atschool,Ihavemanysub

　　看看有没有语法错误

　　Hallo,mynameisDavid,I’ma16-year-oldboy,IwasborninSeptemberthethirtieth,nineteenninety.IalwaysspeakChineseatschoolandathome,butIhavesecondlanguage,thisisEnglish.Atschool,Ihavemanysubjects,likemath,science,Chinese,art,PEandsoon.There’skindergarten,primary,junior,highschoolanduniversityinchina.Timeflies,I’vefinishmyjunioreducation.IenjoyedplayingPCgamesandlisteningtomusicbefore,butnow,Iliketowalkaloneinthepark.

　　I’vebeentomanyplacesinchina.forexample,HK,Peking,Hangzhou,Nanjingandsoon.HKisabusycity,everyonehereeveryminutedoingtheirworks,theyevenhaven’tfreetimebutinHangzhou,there’snotoomuchworktodo,everyonefeelsrelaxed,andthisisabeautifulcity,Iwanttogotothebeautywestlakeagain.thesecondlargestcityisPeking,there,youcanvisitthePalaceMuseumortheGreatWall,that’swonderful

　　Now,letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.inmyfamilytherearethreepeople,myfather,mymotherandI.myfatherisateacherandmymotherisabusinesswoman.myfatheralwayscooksdinerforuseverydayandaftermealmymotherwashesthetableware.whereamIofcourse,I’mdoingmyhomework.:]

　　Thisholiday,I’llstayhomeandlearnhowtoplaytennis---myfatherwillteachme.

　　Sometime,Ithinkaboutmyfuture.Idreamtobeabusinessman,becauseifIsuccessful,I’llhavemanymoremoney.It’sonlymydream,butIhaven’tknownwhatIwouldtobe.:]