【请专业老师帮改英语作文,大一水平,正文如下,题目要求达标,只批改正文.AnUnforgettableLessonShewasnotmyclosefriend.Butsincethen,webecomethebestfriends.WhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent,amarveloustimeIh】
请专业老师帮改英语作文,大一水平,
正文如下,题目要求达标,只批改正文.
AnUnforgettableLesson
Shewasnotmyclosefriend.Butsincethen,webecomethebestfriends.
WhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent,amarveloustimeIhaveeverbeen,Igotwellwitheveryoneinmyclass,whichmeanstheyareallequaltome.Oneafternoon,wheneverybodywentbackhomeexceptmeandanothergirl,Lily,Isawshewasrestingatthetable.Withconcerntotheclassmate,Isteppedforwardandaskedherwhatwasthematter."Stomache!"Shecouldhardlysaidawordbuttorest.SoIcarriedherhomebymybikeandsweetlysaidgoodbyetoher.IthinkitwasnotabigdealformeforIthoughtit'smydutytoheipclassmatesespeciallywhenonecouldnotturntoothers.
Ontomorrowmorring,Isawherrefrashagainandsentherawarmsmile.ThenasIsitonmydeskIfoundanicewrappedpackagewithapieceofcutecakeinsideit.Suprisedandtouched,Ilookedbackandsaidthanksgratefully.ItwasthefirsttimethatIfeltaboutfriendshipdeeply.
Icouldneverforgethowhappythatdayevenifitwasalittlething.
Sincethen,Ihavelearntwhatahelppersoncouldbringabout.Notonlythehappiness,butalsoaforeverfriendship.
主要看语法和语言上的问题,最好以四级的水平,