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  【请专业老师帮改英语作文,大一水平,正文如下,题目要求达标,只批改正文.AnUnforgettableLessonShewasnotmyclosefriend.Butsincethen,webecomethebestfriends.WhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent,amarveloustimeIh】

  请专业老师帮改英语作文,大一水平,

  正文如下,题目要求达标,只批改正文.

  AnUnforgettableLesson

  Shewasnotmyclosefriend.Butsincethen,webecomethebestfriends.

  WhenIwasajuniormiddleschoolstudent,amarveloustimeIhaveeverbeen,Igotwellwitheveryoneinmyclass,whichmeanstheyareallequaltome.Oneafternoon,wheneverybodywentbackhomeexceptmeandanothergirl,Lily,Isawshewasrestingatthetable.Withconcerntotheclassmate,Isteppedforwardandaskedherwhatwasthematter."Stomache!"Shecouldhardlysaidawordbuttorest.SoIcarriedherhomebymybikeandsweetlysaidgoodbyetoher.IthinkitwasnotabigdealformeforIthoughtit'smydutytoheipclassmatesespeciallywhenonecouldnotturntoothers.

  Ontomorrowmorring,Isawherrefrashagainandsentherawarmsmile.ThenasIsitonmydeskIfoundanicewrappedpackagewithapieceofcutecakeinsideit.Suprisedandtouched,Ilookedbackandsaidthanksgratefully.ItwasthefirsttimethatIfeltaboutfriendshipdeeply.

  Icouldneverforgethowhappythatdayevenifitwasalittlething.

  Sincethen,Ihavelearntwhatahelppersoncouldbringabout.Notonlythehappiness,butalsoaforeverfriendship.

  主要看语法和语言上的问题,最好以四级的水平,

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2020-03-13 18:35
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  我不知道四级是什么水平,我直接就改了!

  AnUnforgettableLesson

  Wewereneverclose,butaftertheincident,webecamebestfriends.

  WhenIwasinmiddleschool,oneofthebestmomentsofmylife,Igotalongwitheveryone,andwasnotbulliedinanyway.Oneafternoon,everyoneleftexceptformeandthisothergirl,Lily,Isawherrestingatthetable.Worriedaboutmyclassmate,Isteppedforwardandaskedifsheisfeelingwell."Stomache!"Wasallshewasabletobluroutbeforegoingbacktorest.SoItookherhomeonmybikeandsweetlysaidgoodbyetoher.IthoughtitwasnotabigdealformeforIthoughtit'smydutytohelpothers,especiallywhennooneisthereforthem.

  Thenextday,Isawherrefreshedagainandsentherawarmsmile.ThenasIsatatmydesk,Inoticedanicelywrappedpackagewithapieceofcutecakeinsideit.Surprisedandtouched,Ilookedbackandthankedher.ItwasthefirsttimethatIfeltthatItrulyfeltadeepfriendship.

  Evenitwasjustalittlegestureofthanks,IcouldneverforgethowhappyIfeltthatday.

  Sincethen,Ihavelearnedwhathelpingpersoncouldbringabout.Notonlyhappiness,butalsofriendship.

  ***thelastsentence,notonly...butalso,hastobeparallelstructure.Whichbasicallymeansifyouused"the"happiness,youhavetouse"the"friendship.Sincetherewasnoadjectivetodescribehappiness,thenyouneedtotakeoutthe"forever"sinceit'sanadjectivedescribethekindoffriendship.

2020-03-13 18:39:44

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