【检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误Lastyear,afterwegurtuatedformjuniorhighschool.WeorganizedajourneytoFenghuang.Phoenixisanoldtownwhichsurroundedbymountainsandriver,It'sfamousforthenightinthetown.whendarkco】
检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
Lastyear,afterwegurtuatedformjuniorhighschool.WeorganizedajourneytoFenghuang.
Phoenixisanoldtownwhichsurroundedbymountainsandriver,It's
famousforthenightinthetown.whendarkcomes,withallthelightlighted,alotsofpeoplewalkedonthe
road,thebaropened,theoldtownfalledintohappiness.
Notonlythebeautifulviewattractme,butalsoIenjoythetimeweplay
together.wewereshoppingandvisiting
thetowninday.Singinganddrinkinginthebaratnight.Moreover,weplay
majiangandporkuntilnextmorning.
Thisisanunforgetablejourney.IbelievethatIwon'tletitdisappearedinmymemory