【谁能帮我改一下这篇英语作文,语法、语句问题.Hello,everybody!Myname’ssophie.Today,thetitleofmyspeechisbadminton—myfavoritesport.Iamfondofplayingsports,becausesportscankeepmyfitandhealthy.WhenI’mfree,Iof】

　　谁能帮我改一下这篇英语作文,语法、语句问题.

　　Hello,everybody!Myname’ssophie.Today,thetitleofmyspeechisbadminton—myfavoritesport.

　　Iamfondofplayingsports,becausesportscankeepmyfitandhealthy.WhenI’mfree,Ioftenplaysportswithmyfriendsatthesportcentre.Andwecanhaveagoodtimewhenweplaytogether.

　　Personally,myfavoritesportisbadminton.Why?Therearemanyreasoncanletmelovebadminton.First,Ithinkitiseasytoplaybadminton.Itdoesn’tliketennis,difficulttocontrol.Badmintonisapopularrecreationalsport.Besides,Illikebadmintonbecauseitcanmakemefeelasenseofaccomplishment.Yes,Iloveitandgoodatit.Andbecauseofbadminton,Imademanynewfriends.Iliketoplayingbadminton,Ilikewatchingbadmintonmatches,too.TheoneofreasonwhyIlikebadmintonisthatOlympicGamesandthebestbadmintonplayerintheChinaofthegameisLinDan.LinDanismyidol,justbecauseofhimIbegantolikebadminton.However,therealreasonwhyIlikebadmintonisthatplaybadmintoncanmakemybodybetterandbetter.Lifedependsonthesports.Butforme,badmintonisoneofthemeaningofmylife.Andplayingbadmintonisnotonlycanstrengthenmybodybut

　　alsomakemeexcitedandrelaxed.WheneverIfeellearningpressureofbreath,Iwillplaybadmintontorelievepressure.

　　BadmintonislotsoffunandIhopeeveryonelovebadminton,too.