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  初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用关于寒假计划的WinterVacationiscoming.ThistimeIwanttodosomethingmeaningful.I'mgoingtospendanhourreadingeveryday.BecauseIwanttolearnnewthingsfromthebooks.Ithinkitisthemo

  初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用

  关于寒假计划的

  WinterVacationiscoming.ThistimeIwanttodosomethingmeaningful.I'mgoingtospendanhourreadingeveryday.BecauseIwanttolearnnewthingsfromthebooks.Ithinkitisthemostimportantthingstolearn.AndIthinkhaveastrongbodyisasimportantaswelearn.SoI'mgoingtoeatanappleaday,becauseanappleadaykeepthedoctoraway.Thisismywintervacation'sresolution.Thatsoundsreallygreat.Ican'twaitit.

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  WinterVacationiscoming.

  ThistimeIwanttodosomethingmeaningful.

  I'mgoingtospendanhourreadingeveryday.

  BecauseIwanttolearnnewthingsfromthebooks.

  Ithinkitisthemostimportantthingtolearn.

  AndIthinkhavingastrongbodyisasimportantasourlearning.

  SoI'mgoingtoeatanappleeveryday,becauseanappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.

  Thisismywintervacation'splan.

  Thatsoundsreallygreat.Ican'twaitforit.

  呃.以上改正了语法错误.以下润色下表达,以供参考.

  WinterVacationisjustaroundthecorner.

  ThistimeIwanttodosomethingmeaningful.

  I'mgoingtospendanhourreadingeverydaybecauseIwanttolearnnewthingsfromthebooks.

  Ithinklearningissuchanimportantthing.

  AndIalsothinkhavingastrongbodyisasimportantasourlearning.

  SoI'mgoingtohaveanappleeveryday,becauseanappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway,asthesayingis(就像俗话说的).

  Thisismywintervacation'splan.

  ThatsoundssogreatthatIcan'twaitforit.

2020-03-17 11:38:33

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