【DearAddimissionsOfficerHello!MynameisXXX,IwasborninXX,XXprovince,duetooutstandingachievementsIadmittedtothetheXXCollegein2003,duringtheschooltimeistudiedhardandperformanceseriously,andalsoiactivelyparticipatedins】

　　DearAddimissionsOfficer

　　Hello!MynameisXXX,IwasborninXX,XXprovince,duetooutstandingachievementsIadmittedtothetheXXCollegein2003,duringtheschooltimeistudiedhardandperformanceseriously,andalsoiactivelyparticipatedinsocialpractice,havingscholarshipsmanytimes.Yearsofuniversitylifehasgivenmeenoughtimetoletmelearnalotofusefulknowledge.IbecameavolunteerofXXCompanyin2005,mainlyresponsibleforthedesignandmaintenance,duringtheservicetime,icompletedthecompany'stasksuccessfully,Aftergraduationin2006,ijoinedtheXXCompany,itfoundedin1974,isthefirstprofessionalmanufacturerofdisposablemedicalinstrumentinChina.Itisamodernhigh-techenterpriseoflarge-scaleindomesticbloodtransfusiontechniquefiledintegratingdevelopment,productionandsalesofmedicalapparatusandsupportinginstruments.thisisalargeenterprise,whichemploysnearly500people.Istartedfromthesalesandtechnicians,halfayearlateriwaspromotedasaresultofoutstandingsalesmanager,andwasresponsibleforthemarketinEastChinaarea.InthenewpositionIhavetoduediligenceandefficientwork,tocreateahugeprofittothecompanywhilealsomakingmyselfeligibletobecomeasalesmanager.Butastheyearsofeconomicdevelopment,Chinaisbecomingincreasinglyinternational,Chineseenterpriseshavealsobeguntotakeapathofinternationalization,whichrequiresasanecessaryforthecompany'ssalesmanagerofainternationalquality,IfeelTherearemanythingsthatIneedtolearn,soIsincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapplication,IreallywanttostudyinXXuniversityandcompletetheMBAProgram.

　　中文要表达的意识是这样的

　　您好~我叫xx,我出生在XX，2003年我以优异的成绩考入ABC大学，在校期间学习认真刻苦表现突出，并积极参加社会实践活动，曾多次获得学校奖学金。几年的大学生活给了我充足的时间让我学到了很多有用的知识。2005年我成为XXX公司的义工，主要负责该公司产品的设计和维护，在职期间圆满完成了公司交予的任务，2006毕业后便加入ABC公司，这是一家大型企业，拥有员工近500人，主要生产XXX，我从销售兼技术员做起，半年后由于业绩突出被提升为销售主管，负责华东区市场。在新的工作岗位上我始终努力，尽职，高效的工作，给公司创造巨大利润的同时也使得自己成为了一名合格的销售主管。但是随着这些年来经济的发展，中国变得越来越国际化，中国的企业也纷纷开始走国际化得道路，这就要求作为一名公司的销售主管必需具备国际化的素质，我感觉到自己还有很多的东西要学习，所以我诚心的希望您能接受我的申请，让我在贵校完成XXX课程~