MyDream

　　WhenIwasachild,Iwantedtobeateacher.Ithanksmyteachermuchbecausehetaughtmealot.

　　Onmytenthbirthday,myfatheraskedme,“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?”Iansweredproudly,“Iwanttobeateacher!”Onhearingthis,myfatherwasveryhappyandsaidtome,“Workhardandyourdreamwillcometrue.”

　　IwishWhenIcameintotheclassroom,thechildrenwerewereveryhappy.Iintroducedmyselftothem.Soon,Igotonwellwiththem.TheyalllikedmeandIlovedthem.Withmyfatherandheadmaster'shelp,Ididtheworkverywell.

　　我的梦想

　　在我小的时候,我想做一名老师.我非常感谢我的老师,因为他交给我很多东西.

　　在我十岁生日那天,我爸爸问我：“长大了想做什么啊?"我自豪地回答,"我想当老师!"听我这么说,我爸爸非常高兴地对我说,"努力吧你的梦想会实现的"

　　我希望当我走进教室,孩子们都非常高兴,我向他们介绍自己,并很快与他们和睦相处.孩子们都喜欢我,我也爱他们.最后在爸爸和同事的帮助下,我把这个工作做的很好.

　　你看这样写可以吗?