【麻烦找一下这封信的语法错误~DEARSIRORMADAMI'mwritingtotellyouthatIhavesomequestionsabouthowtoapplyforthepre-universitycourseinyourschool.First,I'dliketointroducemyself.IamastudentofaseniorhighschoolinS】

　　麻烦找一下这封信的语法错误~

　　DEARSIRORMADAM

　　I'mwritingtotellyouthatIhavesomequestionsabouthowtoapplyforthepre-universitycourseinyourschool.

　　First,I'dliketointroducemyself.IamastudentofaseniorhighschoolinShanghaiandjustfinishedGradetwo.Asoneofthetopstudentsinmyschool,thatIcan'tattendtheuniversityentranceexaminationinShanghaireallypuzzledme.(Imustbacktomyhometowntoattendit,buttheexaminationthereistremendouslydifferentfromitinShanghai)SoIdecidetofurthermystudyabroad.

　　ThenwhattroubledmeisthatI'm17yearsoldnowandI'mnotoldenoughtoapplyforthepre-universitycourse.ThatIneedtoattendanotherpre-universitycourseafterIfinishingtheGradethreeinyourschoolisthereasonwhyIdon'twanttoenrollinthehighschoolcourses.That'sreallyawasteoftime.IfitispossibleI'dliketospendoneyearoroneandhalfayearfinishingallmycoursesinCanadabeforeIapplyformyuniversity.

　　Finally,Ihaven'tgotmystandardlanguagescoresandEnglishisnotmystrengths,butitdoesn'tmatterbecauseIbelievemyselfandIwillworkhardfromnowhenceforth.

　　Ireallyhopethatyoucangivemesomeadvice.I'manoptimisticgirl^^,sowhateveryousayIwillaccept.Pleaseresponsemesoon.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.THANKYOU!

　　YOURSSINCERELY

　　LUCY

　　这不是我的东西-....是个朋友的，她说她自己不大确定要我帮忙改改，我比较懒也没看出来多大错的地方，本人英语也不咋地，所以问了她一下就贴到zhidao上让大家帮忙改改了...如果能在这个基础上改写改写最好了我会加分的