我有一篇希望之星的英语小故事,请大家帮我改一改,Thestorygoesthattwofriendswerewalkingthroughthedesert.Duringsomepointofthejourneytheyhadanargument,andonefriendslappedtheotheroneintheface.Theonewhogot

　　我有一篇希望之星的英语小故事,请大家帮我改一改,

　　Thestorygoesthattwofriendswerewalkingthroughthedesert.Duringsomepointofthejourneytheyhadanargument,andonefriendslappedtheotheroneintheface.

　　Theonewhogotslappedfelthurt,butwithoutsayinganything,wroteinthesand:"Todaymybestfriendslappedmeintheface."

　　Theykeptonwalkinguntiltheyfoundanoasis,wheretheydecidedtotakeabath.Theonewhohadbeenslappedgotstuckinthemireandstarteddrowning,butthefriendsavedhim.

　　Afterherecoveredfromtheneardrowning,hewroteonastone:"Todaymybestfriendsavedmylife."

　　Thefriendwhohadslappedandsavedhisbestfriendaskedhim,"AfterIhurtyou,youwroteinthesandandnowyouwriteonastone.Why?"

　　Theotherfriendreplied:"Whensomeonehurtsusweshouldwriteitdowninsandwherewindsofforgivenesscaneraseitaway.Butwhensomeonedoessomethinggoodforus,wemustengraveitinstonewherenowindcanevereraseit."

　　请大家帮我改好后，重新腾好，写下来。我追加100分