【求改一下这篇英语短文.Lastsummerholiday,Itakeavacationwithmyparents.Wewenttothenaturalparkandsawmanykindsofanimalsinthepark.Therearetigers,monkeys,pandas,lionsandbears.Buttherearealotofgarbage,sotheyseemsn】

　　求改一下这篇英语短文.

　　Lastsummerholiday,Itakeavacationwithmyparents.Wewenttothenaturalparkandsawmanykindsofanimalsinthepark.Therearetigers,monkeys,pandas,lionsandbears.Buttherearealotofgarbage,sotheyseemsnothappy.Theirlifeinthenaturalpark,peopleshouldnotdestroytheirhome.Iwillneverforgetthetirptothenaturalpark.

　　错的地方说明一下、