【请帮忙改这篇英文作文帮我指出其中语法或者时态之类的错误,最好能有评价1.目前盗版的现象比较严重2.造成这种现象的原因及危害3.SayNotoPiratedProductsNowdays,theappearanceofpiracyinoursocietyi】

　　请帮忙改这篇英文作文

　　帮我指出其中语法或者时态之类的错误,最好能有评价

　　1.目前盗版的现象比较严重

　　2.造成这种现象的原因及危害

　　3.

　　SayNotoPiratedProducts

　　Nowdays,theappearanceofpiracyinoursocietyisveryserious.Piratedproductsdependontheircheapoperatingcostandeasymakingmoreandmoreappealtothelowlesspeople.Sosomeoflowlesspeopleinordertoseekthemoney,theyproducedthepiratedproducts.

　　Thisappearancethreatentheintellctualpropertyrightsserious.Itbreaksthelawandcopyrightsinfringement.

　　Inmyopinion,weshouldstoptobuythepiratedproductsfromourselves.Ifweseesomebodywhobuyingorsellingthepiratedproducts,wemusttryallmeanstostopthemandtellthemtheharmofthisthing.

　　Ithinkattackthepiracyisourduty.

　　我英文很烂……