初一英语值日报告（修改）Hello,everybody!MyChinesenameisXieAiLing,andmyEnglishnameisTina.I'mfromZiYang.TodayisSeptemberthenineteenth,TodayisMondayandaniceday,I'mveryhappy.I'm12yearsoldandmybirthdayisNovembe

　　初一英语值日报告（修改）

　　Hello,everybody!MyChinesenameisXieAiLing,andmyEnglishnameisTina.I'mfromZiYang.TodayisSeptemberthenineteenth,TodayisMondayandaniceday,I'mveryhappy.I'm12yearsoldandmybirthdayisNovemberthenineth.IstudyintheCHENGDUEXPERIMENTALFOREIGNLANGUAGESSCHOOLWESTCAMPUS,Grade1,Class1B.Ilikedogs,Iliketoeatlolipop.Now,I'mtellingajoketoyou,It'sveryshort.

　　首先求个初一新生一般都听得懂的很简短的笑话

　　然后,帮忙修改一下我上面那段英文,主要修改,语法错误,用词错误,还有,能用更简单的词表达就帮忙修改一下（修改处,用中文表示,如果可以,就再写下为什么要修改）谢谢