修改英语文章,初二水平.嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.谢谢大家.对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起...ThedisadvantageofcomputersAtthemoment,moreandmorestudents
修改英语文章,初二水平.
嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.
谢谢大家.
对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起...
Thedisadvantageofcomputers
Atthemoment,moreandmorestudentsarekeenonsurfingtheInternet,that’sbadfortheyhealth.
Infacts,someinformationcanprovesurfingtheInternetisharmful.Forexample,there’sagameverywell-knowninarecent,just‘stealvegetables’.Thisgameleadssomestudentsgetupin3amtosurfingtheInternet.Theycheckthee-mailseverydaymanytimesandspentalotoftimetotalkwithnetfriendsthatforgettime.
Forthesereasons,theyloseinterestinstudy,andthehealthworseandworse.
Ithinktheyaresostupid.Theydon’tknowtheimportancetosleep?Theyaremakingjoketolife!
Teenager,weshouldprotectourlife,treasuretime.so,awaytheInternettemptation!