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  关于感恩的英语作文求修改IwanttothankyouThanksgivingdayisadaywhichusedtocelebratethegoodharvest.Butnow,itisaholiday,whichwethanktosomeonewhohelpedus.Today,Iwanttothankyou—myparents.Becauseofyou,Iknew

  关于感恩的英语作文求修改Iwanttothankyou

  Thanksgivingdayisadaywhichusedtocelebratethegoodharvest.Butnow,itisaholiday,whichwethanktosomeonewhohelpedus.Today,Iwanttothankyou—myparents.

  Becauseofyou,Iknewsomethingaboutthisworld.Becauseofyou,Irealizedhowtobeawell-behavedgirl.Becauseofyou,IgotconfidencetodosomethingthatIwasafraidbefore.

  Thankyou,mydearestmom.Itisyouwhobringmetotheworld.Itisyouwhoteachmehowtolearn.Whenthedarknesscomes,youturnonthelightsinmyheart.Whenmyconfidenceisbrokenintopieces,youpickthemupandtellmethatNevergiveup.Anytime,youarethecompasswhichleadsmetotherightway.

  Iwillgivethesincerelythankstomydeardad.Youarethefirmestmountaininmyheart.Youalwayssaythatifyoudon’tworkharder,youwon’tgetgoodmarks.Idoworkharder,andIdogetgoodmarks.Youcookeverymealforme,wheneverorwherever.Iwillrememberthethingsallofyousay.Althoughtheyaresimple,theyarereallypractical.

  However,howaboutthesocialproblem?Nowadays,quiteafewstudentsarebecomelessandlessideaofbeinggrateful.Theythinkallthesuchthingsforgranted,asparentssupportingthem,teachershelpingthemandwaitersservingthem.Theyjustsay"Thankyou"toothers,butneverdoanythingactually.

  Weshoulddosomethingforthepeoplewhoeverhelpedus.Suchas,helpingyourmotherdohousework,don’tletyourparentstooworriedandtryyourbesttoshowthemyouarethebest.“Iwanttothankyou”isnotasimpleexpression.Everyoneshouldprovehowyouexpressyoursincerelythank!

  求修改,挑一下语法错误或者是其他什么可以改进的地方,明天演讲要用.

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2020-03-26 19:00
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贾玉福

  中式英语比较严重///

2020-03-26 19:03:25
刘士平

  -=这个要肿么改

2020-03-26 19:04:00
贾玉福

  很难跟你每个句子修改不了解你想表达的想法 你要自己多看几变/

2020-03-26 19:05:32
刘士平

  00提几句呢我看一下大概是肿么改。应试教育嘛,你也懂得。我们只会做选择题

2020-03-26 19:09:06
贾玉福

  Thanksgivingdayisadaywhichusedtocelebratethegoodharvest.Butnow,itisaholiday,whichwethanktosomeonewhohelpedus.Today,Iwanttothankyou—myparents.改下第一段 不知道有没有把你的意思改了Thanksgivingdayisadaywhichusedtocelebratethegoodharvest.Butnow,Iwanttothankmyparentswhosupportedandhelpedus.其实写的这些 你说出来 大家都能明白 但出于个人写作习惯问题.简单点好.

2020-03-26 19:12:04
刘士平

  好的非常感谢个人写作习惯神马的还是要慢慢来养成啦。。。~

2020-03-26 19:14:08

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