【请帮我看下下面一封信中的错误,并纠正这是我用英语给外国人写的一封信,这封信对我来说意义重大,Dear**,I`ma14-year-oldboyinChongqingChina,Asyouknow,I`monly14sothatmyEnglishisnotverygood.pleasefo】
请帮我看下下面一封信中的错误,并纠正
这是我用英语给外国人写的一封信,这封信对我来说意义重大,
Dear**,
I`ma14-year-oldboyinChongqingChina,Asyouknow,I`monly14sothatmyEnglishisnotverygood.pleaseforgivemyunfluentsentences.(Toyoursurprise,Iamingrade10!)
Ihaveseenyourmoviesuchas,,andsoon.Ifallinlovewiththembeacausetheyareveryexcitingandsuitmeverymuch.WhenIsawyourmovie,allthethingsthatareunhappywereallforgotten.Andalso,youlookverycoolinthemovies.
Tellyouainterestingthing.Inthemovie,almosteverysencesyouarein,youwearahat.Ithinkthehatyouwearareallwonderful.soIhavemyhaircutandbuyaplentyofcapsinstores.WhenIweartheminschool.myclassmatespraiseit.Then,Iamveryproundtosay:"myinsprationisfromthemanwhonamed***."
WhenIamsad,Ilookatthephotosofyou.Iwillbehappy.WhenIamintrouble,Ilookatthephotosofyou.ThenIwillbestrongerandgetoverthem.beacuseyouractionsmovemeeverytime.Irememberthatyousaidyourmovitepowerisfromyourdreams.ButIwanttosay,mymovitepowerisfromyou.Ikonw,there`remanyfansofyouintheworld.Iamjustoneofthemandmypowerissmall.Butmypassiontoyouisnotsmallasmybody.Iwillalwaysfollowtoyouandsupportyouallthetime!
Chongqingisabigcitywithmantfantansythings,thetasteyhot-pothereisfamousintheworld,Welcometoyou!
PS:(There`saforeignteacherteachingmeinmyschool.Helookslikeyouverymuch!SowheniSawhim,healwaysremindmeofyou.)
Mayjoybewithyoualways.
BestWishes,
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