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  【请帮我看下下面一封信中的错误,并纠正这是我用英语给外国人写的一封信,这封信对我来说意义重大,Dear**,I`ma14-year-oldboyinChongqingChina,Asyouknow,I`monly14sothatmyEnglishisnotverygood.pleasefo】

  请帮我看下下面一封信中的错误,并纠正

  这是我用英语给外国人写的一封信,这封信对我来说意义重大,

  Dear**,

  I`ma14-year-oldboyinChongqingChina,Asyouknow,I`monly14sothatmyEnglishisnotverygood.pleaseforgivemyunfluentsentences.(Toyoursurprise,Iamingrade10!)

  Ihaveseenyourmoviesuchas,,andsoon.Ifallinlovewiththembeacausetheyareveryexcitingandsuitmeverymuch.WhenIsawyourmovie,allthethingsthatareunhappywereallforgotten.Andalso,youlookverycoolinthemovies.

  Tellyouainterestingthing.Inthemovie,almosteverysencesyouarein,youwearahat.Ithinkthehatyouwearareallwonderful.soIhavemyhaircutandbuyaplentyofcapsinstores.WhenIweartheminschool.myclassmatespraiseit.Then,Iamveryproundtosay:"myinsprationisfromthemanwhonamed***."

  WhenIamsad,Ilookatthephotosofyou.Iwillbehappy.WhenIamintrouble,Ilookatthephotosofyou.ThenIwillbestrongerandgetoverthem.beacuseyouractionsmovemeeverytime.Irememberthatyousaidyourmovitepowerisfromyourdreams.ButIwanttosay,mymovitepowerisfromyou.Ikonw,there`remanyfansofyouintheworld.Iamjustoneofthemandmypowerissmall.Butmypassiontoyouisnotsmallasmybody.Iwillalwaysfollowtoyouandsupportyouallthetime!

  Chongqingisabigcitywithmantfantansythings,thetasteyhot-pothereisfamousintheworld,Welcometoyou!

  PS:(There`saforeignteacherteachingmeinmyschool.Helookslikeyouverymuch!SowheniSawhim,healwaysremindmeofyou.)

  Mayjoybewithyoualways.

  BestWishes,

  **

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刘瀚猛

  1Chongqin,China

  2I'monly14somyEnglishis...

  3Pleaseforgive...

  4IaminGrade10

  5Ihaveseenyourmovienamed...

  6because

  7theyareveryexcitingandtheyarejusttomytastes

  8WhenIwatchyourmovie,allthethingsunhappenwillbeforgotten.Andyoulooksocoolinthemoviesaswell.Letmetellyouaninterestingthing.

  9youwearahatalmosteveryscenceyoushowup.

  10Iweartheminmyschool

  11WhenIamunhappy,Ihavealookatyourphotos,then,Iturntobehappier.

  12Alloftheseareallbecauseyou!Itisyouwhommakememovefurther!

  13movitepower错了,应该是motivity表示动力

  14intheworld改成allovertheworld吧,应该感觉会好一点,你用的也没有错误.

  15mypowerissmall改成perhapsIamnothing

  16Butmypassiontoyouisnotsmallasmybody.还是别要了吧,外国人不一定听得懂,而且表述上也有问题

  17ButIwllfollowandsupportyouallthetime!

  18withmanyfantansythings,andthe...

  19Welcometoyou改成Weareheretowelcomeyou!

  20foreignteacher改成Englishteacher吧,foreignteacher意味着英语老师,但对于外国人来说,foreignteacher对他会有歧义.

  21SowhenIseehim,healwaysremindsmeofyou!

  我的意见,仅供参考,

2020-03-27 01:53:38

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