假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My mother always bought gifts to me for my birthdays.With my fifteen birthday around the corner,she asked me which I wanted.For the first time,I realize how lucky I was to have born in such a fortunate family.I was satisfying and there was nothing more I needed.That was because I told my mother that instead of getting an expensive gift,I'd love to use the money to help others.At the first,she felt surprised.When she realized I was seriously,she offered me 500yuan.I bought some toys and went to the orphanage in our city.I handed out the toys to the child and had a good time with them.