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  【刚写的英语作文,Asayinggoesthat“failingtoeducatethechildisthefaultofthafather”.itisacommonphenomenonthatmanyparentswouldlikelytotelltheirkidwhatshouldbedo,andforcethemtochangetheirhabit,whileignoringk】

  刚写的英语作文,

  Asayinggoesthat“failingtoeducatethechildisthefaultofthafather”.itisacommonphenomenonthatmanyparentswouldlikelytotelltheirkidwhatshouldbedo,andforcethemtochangetheirhabit,whileignoringkids’realideasaswellastheirpersonalhobbies,outoftheintentionthat,itmaypreventtheirkidsbeenhurt.Hencesomeyoungpeoplecomplainthatitissopainfultobeforcedtochangetheirhabitsbytheadultworld.

  Therearealsoanotherkindofparents,theylovestheirkidsforsure,buttheyseldominterferekid’sideasoutofspoil,justletthemdowhatevertheylikeatthemosttime,andstandouttopointoutwhatthekidsdonewerewrongintime,soastoavoidthecomingmistakes.

  Fromthepointofmyself,Isupportthelatterone.Practicemakesperfect.Onlythelessonsdrawnbyone’sownexperiencecanleavedeepimpression.Iamnotintendtoobjectthatparentsshouldmakedecisionforkids.Onthecontrary,Iconsiderparentsshouldgivetheguidancetotheirkidsatthepropertime,sothatleadtheirkidstoamoreflatlifejourney.Butthedegreeissoimportant,todoundulyisoutofquestionleadtonegativeeffects.Parentsshouldkeepcloseattentiontokids’behavior,andgivesuggestionsatthepropertimetosomesuitableextent,withoutinterferebadly.

  HaveyoueverreadthefamousAmericanwritingsonandlovesbyfamouswriterlawrenceInthisarticle,Lawrencedepictedasonclinggedbadlyonhismothernotonlyoncareerbutalsoonpersonalloves.Hecandonothingbutliedonhermother’semotionaleffect.Heevertriedtogooutofhismother’semotionalcontrol,butinvain.Thus,afterhismotherdied,thereleftnooneforhimtodependon.Atlast.hewasleftintheendnakedofeverythingwiththedrifttowardsdeath.

  Tosummerup,Ialwaysholdtheviewthat,parentsshouldn’tinterferetheirkidstoomuch,insteadofforcetheirkidstochangetheirhabit,butletthekidsgofree,andgiveguidanceproperly,ifnecessary.Wisdomcomesbysuffering.

  由于写得仓促,有几处拼写错误:

  sonandloves改为SONSANDLOVERS

  telltheirkid改为telltheirkids

  很多出HABIT应该用复数

  我也是N久没写作文了,最近要考试。希望大家给予宝贵意见,

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2020-03-28 13:44
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  高人!错误实在太多,改都不好改.单复数,主动被动,基本结构,都有错的.你干脆把题目发到网上让网友帮你写一篇吧,反而省事.

2020-03-28 13:46:01

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