初三英语改错TheGreenslikestravellingverymuch,Lastsummer,theywenttovisittheSouthAmerica.Theystartedtheirtripinthethickforestthere,Theycan'ttravelthroughtheforestbyroad,becausetherewerenotanyroads.Sotheyhadtotr

　　初三英语改错

　　TheGreenslikestravellingverymuch,Lastsummer,theywenttovisittheSouthAmerica.Theystartedtheirtripinthethickforestthere,Theycan'ttravelthroughtheforestbyroad,becausetherewerenotanyroads.Sotheyhadtotravelwithboat.Theywereenjoyedtheirboattripverymuch.Atnighttheytiedtheboattobigtreebytheriverbanknaravillage.Hisguideboughtsomefoodfromthevillagesandtheycookedthemthemselves.Totellthetruth,thetripwasabitdanger,buttheyreallyenjoyedit.

　　有十处错误,但我找不到

　　1.theywenttovisittheSouthAmerica.wentto与visit重复了

　　2.Theycan'ttravelthroughtheforestbyroadcan't改为couldn't

　　3.travelthrough改成gothrough

　　4.Theywereenjoyedtheirboattripverymuch.把were去掉

　　5.andtheycookedthemthemselves.改为bythemselves

　　6.thetripwasabitdanger.danger改为dangerous

　　另外错误在哪里呢