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帮我查看下我写的英语作文有什么问题吗?哪儿有问题,怎么改?我在1月6日今天晚上就要要!
Myhobby
Twoyearsago,Ididn'tlikemusic.Itshouldbesaidisnotlikeitverymuch.
Ihadplentyoftime,butIspentlotsoftimeonplayingwithcomputers.WhenIwasveryyoung,Ididn'tthinklisteningtomusicwasinteresting,becauseIfoundnothingmoreinterestingthanthecomputergames.
ButI'vechangednow.Ienjoymusicverymuch.Mainlyistheclassicalmusic.
Musicissometimescalledauniversallanguage.Acomposerwhocannotspeakasinglewordofourlanguagecanmakeusfeeljoyandpride,exaltationanddespair,peaceandmysterythroughhismusic.HopeeverybodycanandIsharetheclassicalmusic
其实我很想把悬赏分给大家，但是没办法，他给我的帮助多一些，所以我给他了，抱歉