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亲好心人帮我看看此篇作文是否有问题,包括时态,还有语法
MyHobby
Ihavemanyhobbies.Suchaslistentomusic.playbasketballandreadbooks
Inmysparetime,Ilikelisteningtosomemusic,Itcanmakemerelaxandletmeforgetmyunhappymoment.sometimesIlikereadsomebook.thehistorybooksismyfavorite,whichIthinkisbeneficialtomystudyAtthesametime,IalsoliketheInternetThroughtheInternetIcangetsomeusefulinformationandchatwithmyfriendsaswell.TheInternethasshortenedourdistance.