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  MyfavouritehobbyMyfavoritehobbyisreadingbooks,Ioftenreadbooksathomeinmyfreetime.Inotonlyreadsomeinterestingbookslikenovels,butalsoreadsomeeducationalbooks.Ilikereadingquietly,soIusuallydoitalone.Ieitherreadmy

  Myfavouritehobby

  Myfavoritehobbyisreadingbooks,Ioftenreadbooksathomeinmyfreetime.Inotonlyreadsomeinterestingbookslikenovels,butalsoreadsomeeducationalbooks.Ilikereadingquietly,soIusuallydoitalone.Ieitherreadmyownbooks,orborrowfrommyfriendstoread.Inshort,Ihavealreadyreadalotofbooksuptillnow.Icanlearnlotsofknowledgesfrombooks.Theyarelikemygoodfriendsandteachers.Ilovereadingbooks.MaybeI`llbeanovelistinthefuture.Iwouldliketomakemyhobbymyfuturecareer.

  我最喜欢的爱好

  我最喜欢的爱好是读书,我经常在我业余的时间在家看书.我不仅读一些像小说这样有趣的书,而且还读一些具有教育意义的书.我喜欢安静的读书,所以我经常独自一人.我要么读我自己的书,要么从朋友那儿借来读.总之,到现在为止我已经读过很多书了.我能从书中学到许多知识.它们就像我的良师益友.我热爱读书.也许我将来会做一名小说家.我愿意把我的爱好变成我的事业.

  句子不通的改一下哈,实在是太渣了,

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2020-03-30 12:42
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廖光灯

  Myfavouritehobby

  Myfavoritehobbyisreadingbooks,Ioftenreadbooksathomeinmyfreetime.I(加do)notonlyreadsomeinterestingbookslikenovels,butalsoreadsomeeducationalbooks.Ilikereadingquietly,soIusuallydoitalone.Ieitherreadmyownbooks,orborrowfrommyfriendstoread.Inshort,Ihavealreadyreadalotofbooksuptillnow.Icanlearnlotsofknowledgesfrombooks.Theyarelikemygoodfriendsandteachers.Ilovereadingbooks.MaybeI`llbeanovelistinthefuture.Iwouldliketomakemyhobby(加into或把make变为turninto)myfuturecareer.

  括号内为改的内容,

  写的不错啊,连词用的都很好,一般学生都用不上连词,

  verygood!

2020-03-30 12:47:29
邱菲

  你改了最不该改的两个地方

2020-03-30 12:51:09
廖光灯

  呵呵,请注明为什么?没有助动词是句子?没听说过makesthsth......

2020-03-30 12:55:15

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