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高中英语作文打分MYteacherMRMooreMrMooreismyteacherwhoisalovelyman.Heisthirty-fouryearsold.Buthelookslikeayoungmanbecauseheaiwaysdoingexercise.Soheisveryhealthy.Weallwanttohaveahealthybodylikehis,isn'ti
高中英语作文打分
MYteacherMRMoore
MrMooreismyteacherwhoisalovelyman.
Heisthirty-fouryearsold.Buthelookslikeayoungmanbecauseheaiwaysdoingexercise.Soheisveryhealthy.Weallwanttohaveahealthybodylikehis,isn'tit?MrMooreismyfriendratherthanmyteacher.Healwaysencouragingustotryourbesttostudy.Sowehaveagoodhobbyoflearning.Healsoleadesustoaworld
of"why".Ifwehavesomeproblemsonstudy,wewillaskforhelpveryactively.Howhappywearewhenwesolvingtheproblems!
Suchagreatman!Wealladmirehimmoreandmore.
满分是30,希望认真打分,哪些地方错了希望能指出来
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2020-03-30 20:10