y英语语法修改Peoplewouldliketodosomeshoppinginthecity,fortherearemanygoodsforthemtochoose;parentswanttosendtheirchildreninthecity,fortheeducationalfacilitiesinthecityaremoreadvanced;workershopetoworkinth
y英语语法修改
Peoplewouldliketodosomeshoppinginthecity,fortherearemanygoodsforthemtochoose;parentswanttosendtheirchildreninthecity,fortheeducationalfacilitiesinthecityaremoreadvanced;workershopetoworkinthecity,fortheyhavemoreopportunitiesandcanearnmoremoney.thetrafficincitiesismoreconvenient.Youcangosomewherebyplane、subway、busortaxi.Yetpeoplestillgothecountrysidetoenjoytherurallifeiftheyhavetimetoenjoythefreshair.
看看有没有语病,改的检点容易一点.