这是我自己写的一篇关于低碳生活的文章,要去参加演讲,请大家伙帮我纠正一下其中的错误,谢谢IamastudentofGuiyangⅢ.Iwasthefirsttimetoparticipateinthiscompetition.Iamhonoredtostandhereandspeakf

　　这是我自己写的一篇关于低碳生活的文章,要去参加演讲,请大家伙帮我纠正一下其中的错误,谢谢

　　IamastudentofGuiyangⅢ.Iwasthefirsttimetoparticipateinthiscompetition.Iamhonoredtostandhereandspeakfoeeveryone.First,whatImustsayishowtoachieve"thegreenJourney,thelow-carbonlife".Theso-calledlow-carbonlifeisreducesthecarbondioxideemissions.Thistinsomewhatcomples,butactuallyverysimple.Forexample,wegoonajourneywhenmaychoosethewalkorridethebicyclenottodrive.wemayalsouseelectricitythroughthereductionreducethecarbondioxidetheemissions.Good,spokeofthis.Ihopedthateverybodycangointoaction."thegreenjourney,thelow-carbonlife"startsfromus