【求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章Manypeoplelikedogs.Butmostofthemdon’tknowdogsverymuch,evenadogkeeper.Thissummer,Ireceivedabookcalled‘whisperofwisdom’.AndIreaditintwodays.Itisanencyclopediaofdogs.Itte】
求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章
Manypeoplelikedogs.Butmostofthemdon’tknowdogsverymuch,evenadogkeeper.
Thissummer,Ireceivedabookcalled‘whisperofwisdom’.AndIreaditintwodays.
Itisanencyclopediaofdogs.Ittellsus‘whydogsdothingstheydo.’
Therearemanysmallstoriesinthisbook;eachstoryhasabeautifulpicture.Iknowinterestingthingsineachstory,andIsawdifferentkindsofdogsineachpictures.
Ilikethestory‘thegamesdogsplay’verymuch.Yes,dogsloveplayingwiththeirowners.Theywillbeveryhappyifyouplaywithhimorgivehimsometoys.Butdoyouknow?Ifyougiveadogthesametoyeveryday,hewillbeunhappyandrefusetoplaywithyou.Butdon’tworried,thewritertellsushowtoplaywithadog.Hesays,yourdogshouldbegivenonlyonetoplaywithatatime.Forexample,youhaveaballandadoll;yougivetheballtoyourdoginthemorning,andtakeitawayintheevening.Thenextday,youshouldgivehimthedoll.Thiswillkeepyourdog’sattentionbynotknowingwhichtoyitwillgeteachday,makingthetoyallthemoreexciting.
AfterIreadthestory,Iknowthewriterlovethedogdeeply(好像有点问题,我想说的是:作者有多么爱狗……)manypeoplelovedogs,butIhaven’tseenanypeoplewho(如此地了解狗的思想)before.
ThebookiswrittenbyanAustralian,andthewriterwrotethestoryforhiswifeandlovelydaughters.Butforme,(它有着更深一层的含义).BecausethisbookisfromafriendofmineinAustralia.Shehadtwodogs,andshelovedthem.Ilivedinherhouseforaweek,andIhelpedthemwalkthedogs,feedthedogsfood.Thissummer,shesentmethebook‘whisperofwisdom’.(在扉页上),Shewroteasentence‘DearAngel,thanksforthewalksandfeedingusdinnereverynight!Wehopeyoulikethisbookaboutdogsandrememberus.Meg&Mickey(thenamesofthedogs)’
Yes,Iwillrememberthem!Thoughweonlylivedtogetherforaweek,Iwillrememberthemforever!MegandMickey,youtoldmethatdogshavelove,too.Youtoldmedogsarehuman’sgoodfriends.Youtoldmehumananddogscanlivehappilytogether.
Dogsaresimilartochildren.Theywillbehappyifyougivethemaboneoratoy.butifyougivethemasmileorastroke,themwillbehappier.Youlovethem,theyloveyou.
ThoughIdon’thaveadog,I’llkeepthebookinmybookcase.Because(它承载了一段记忆),amemoryo