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  【求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章Manypeoplelikedogs.Butmostofthemdon’tknowdogsverymuch,evenadogkeeper.Thissummer,Ireceivedabookcalled‘whisperofwisdom’.AndIreaditintwodays.Itisanencyclopediaofdogs.Itte】

  求英语高手帮我修改下这篇文章

  Manypeoplelikedogs.Butmostofthemdon’tknowdogsverymuch,evenadogkeeper.

  Thissummer,Ireceivedabookcalled‘whisperofwisdom’.AndIreaditintwodays.

  Itisanencyclopediaofdogs.Ittellsus‘whydogsdothingstheydo.’

  Therearemanysmallstoriesinthisbook;eachstoryhasabeautifulpicture.Iknowinterestingthingsineachstory,andIsawdifferentkindsofdogsineachpictures.

  Ilikethestory‘thegamesdogsplay’verymuch.Yes,dogsloveplayingwiththeirowners.Theywillbeveryhappyifyouplaywithhimorgivehimsometoys.Butdoyouknow?Ifyougiveadogthesametoyeveryday,hewillbeunhappyandrefusetoplaywithyou.Butdon’tworried,thewritertellsushowtoplaywithadog.Hesays,yourdogshouldbegivenonlyonetoplaywithatatime.Forexample,youhaveaballandadoll;yougivetheballtoyourdoginthemorning,andtakeitawayintheevening.Thenextday,youshouldgivehimthedoll.Thiswillkeepyourdog’sattentionbynotknowingwhichtoyitwillgeteachday,makingthetoyallthemoreexciting.

  AfterIreadthestory,Iknowthewriterlovethedogdeeply(好像有点问题,我想说的是:作者有多么爱狗……)manypeoplelovedogs,butIhaven’tseenanypeoplewho(如此地了解狗的思想)before.

  ThebookiswrittenbyanAustralian,andthewriterwrotethestoryforhiswifeandlovelydaughters.Butforme,(它有着更深一层的含义).BecausethisbookisfromafriendofmineinAustralia.Shehadtwodogs,andshelovedthem.Ilivedinherhouseforaweek,andIhelpedthemwalkthedogs,feedthedogsfood.Thissummer,shesentmethebook‘whisperofwisdom’.(在扉页上),Shewroteasentence‘DearAngel,thanksforthewalksandfeedingusdinnereverynight!Wehopeyoulikethisbookaboutdogsandrememberus.Meg&Mickey(thenamesofthedogs)’

  Yes,Iwillrememberthem!Thoughweonlylivedtogetherforaweek,Iwillrememberthemforever!MegandMickey,youtoldmethatdogshavelove,too.Youtoldmedogsarehuman’sgoodfriends.Youtoldmehumananddogscanlivehappilytogether.

  Dogsaresimilartochildren.Theywillbehappyifyougivethemaboneoratoy.butifyougivethemasmileorastroke,themwillbehappier.Youlovethem,theyloveyou.

  ThoughIdon’thaveadog,I’llkeepthebookinmybookcase.Because(它承载了一段记忆),amemoryo

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  楼主稍等啊~~~~~奋笔疾书中不行采纳答案先55555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555Manypeoplelikedogs.Butmostofthem,evenadogkeeper,don’tknowdogsverymuch.调整了一下even...的语...

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