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  帮忙修改下这篇英语文章ChineseFamilyWhataresomeofcommondifficultiesinrelationshipsandwhatarethecauses?First,lackingofeffectivecommunicationisthecommondifficultyinrelationshipsinChinesefamily.Whenthefamilies

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  ChineseFamily

  Whataresomeofcommondifficultiesinrelationshipsandwhatarethecauses?

  First,lackingofeffectivecommunicationisthecommondifficultyinrelationshipsinChinesefamily.Whenthefamiliesmeetsomedifficulties,couplesarenottryingtosolveproblems.Theyfocusonwhoistherightone!Becauseofthis,Chinesefamilycan’ttrulyknowabouteachother’sthinking.Withtheincreasingoftheaccumulationoftheproblem,onedaytheseproblemssuddenlyexplode.Atthistime,itwillbemoredifficulttomaintaintherelationshipinthefamily.

  Second,parentsaredomineering.Theyliketomakechoicesfortheirchildren.InChina,wealwayssay:“Therewasacoldbecalled.Yourmotherthinksyouarecold.”Parentsthinkchildrenshouldfinishthedream,whichtheparentshaven’tfinished.Mostchildrenstudycoursestheydon’tliketo.Buttheyhavenochoice.WhenIwasinprimaryschool,IhadtostudyextraEnglish,Math,Chineseandmusicclasses.Ihatedmyparentsatthattime.Theydeprivedofmyplaytime.Ididn’twanttotalktothem.Ourrelationshipwasnotverygood.Ithinkmanystudentshavethesameexperienceasme.

  Third,inChinesefamily,therelationshipbetweenthemothersandthedaughtersinlawisverydifficulttodealwith.Womancan’ttreatherson’swifewell.Becauseshethinkshersonisthebestmanintheworld.Themotheralwayswantshersontomarrywithaperfectgirl.Whentheson’swifedoesmistakes,evenit’sasmallone.Themotherwillscoldher.Italsomakesthemanwhobetweenthemotherandthewifeembarrass.NowinChina,manyTVshowstalkedaboutthisproblem.Youcanwatchthemifyouwantto.

  ThesearesomeofcommondifficultiesinrelationshipsinChinesefamily.

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2020-04-01 19:44
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赖朝安

  这篇文章里用的多是短句,不漂亮,得用长句组合一下才好。"[]"的部分我已经重新组合过如果满意的话,请采纳,谢谢。ChineseFamilyWhataresomeofcommondifficultiesinrelationshipsandwhatarethecauses...

2020-04-01 19:48:42
付琨

  感谢,果然一改好多了。这篇写的意思语法什么还行吗

2020-04-01 19:50:31
赖朝安

  思路很清楚,语法也很到位。这些优势要继续保持。但明显这么长考试是不可取的,注意一下就好。

2020-04-01 19:51:28
付琨

  这个是我要演讲的,非常感谢你的帮助!

2020-04-01 19:53:41
赖朝安

  请采纳

2020-04-01 19:56:04

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