请高手来看看这篇文章找找有什么需要改正的地方(语法句式词汇).Amother'sloveislikeacircle,ithasnobeggingandending,nostrongerbondonearth.ithinkit’sreallytrueformymother.Motherlovesmeineveryas
请高手来看看这篇文章找找有什么需要改正的地方(语法句式词汇).
Amother'sloveislikeacircle,ithasnobeggingandending,
nostrongerbondonearth.ithinkit’sreallytrueformymother.
Motherlovesmeineveryaspectofmylife.Forexample,sincetheschoolwherelstudyisfarawayfrommyhome,Ihavetogetupveryearlyeverymorning.Ifindbreakfastreadyonthetable.SeeingthehotmealIamtoomovedtosayaword.Asamatteroffact,Motherdoesnotaskmetothankherinwords.also,mother’sjobisverybusy,butshelookaftermecarefully.Hereyeswiththelove-lightisshiningeverytime.shegivesmethesecurityofahappyhome,ifeelIamveryhappiness.
Ourmothersloveus,theyusetheirlivesbringingusup.let’sbethankfultoourmothersfortheylovewhitahigherlove.