帮忙修改一下我写的英文自我介绍!Goodafternonn,everyteacher!Itisreallymyhonortoseeyouagain.Ihopeicanmakeagoodperformancetoday.Infact,Ihavesomenervous.SoifIwillmakesomemistakesinmytalk,pleaseexcuseme.

　　帮忙修改一下我写的英文自我介绍!

　　Goodafternonn,everyteacher!

　　Itisreallymyhonortoseeyouagain.

　　Ihopeicanmakeagoodperformancetoday.

　　Infact,Ihavesomenervous.SoifIwillmakesomemistakesinmytalk,pleaseexcuseme.

　　Nowiwillintroducemyselfbriefly.

　　Iam28yearsold.Iwasborninatownofchongqing.

　　Iwasgraduatedfromxi’anuniversityoftechnology.mymajoriselectronicalandinformationalengineering.andigotmybachelordegreeintheyearof2003.andaftergraduateedfromuniversity,Ibecameateacher.Ihavebeenteachingatavocationalschoolofxi’anforthreeyears.Andnow,IamapostgraduatestudentofCIAE.Iwillgetmymasterdegreeinthenextyear.

　　Now,Iwillintroucemyfamilytoyou.Myfamilyisreallyabigfamily.Ihavethreeeldersisters.Andtheyallmarried,andhaveachildforeachownfamily.Mymotherisafarmer,andmyfatherisaworkerofacoalmine.Soyoucanimagethatourlifeisverytough.Butanyhow,wehavepulledthrough.Aloughthesituationofmufamilyisnotthebest,itismorebetterthanthepast.Wearesatisfied.Ilovetheeverymemberofmyfamilyjustastheyloveme.Inmyopinion,thefamilyismostinportantinmylife.

　　Ok.Now,letmetalkaboutmyhobby.Myhobbyisextensive.Inmysparetime,Ilikedoingsports,listeningmusic,watchingTV,sleeping,cooking,andeatingetc.Imostlikeplayingbadminton,becauseIonlycanhandleit.Infact,Iwanttolearntennis.Ithinkitisinterestingandfierce.ButIknowthatIamshortofthetalentinsports,Iwilllearnveryslowly.Thenthereisnocoachwillingtoteachmeanylonger.SoIhopeIcanencounterthemostpatientcoachinthefuture.

　　That’sall.Thanksforyourattention.