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  Havingreadyouradinthenewspaper,IfeelI'mfitthejob,soI'mwritingtoapplyforthat.I'ma21-year-oldgirl,1.68meterstall.AsagraduatefromChengduHuaxiTravelSchool,IspokenotonlystandardPutonghua,butalsoexcellentEnglish.Igott

  Havingreadyouradinthenewspaper,IfeelI'mfitthejob,soI'mwritingtoapplyforthat.I'ma21-year-oldgirl,1.68meterstall.AsagraduatefromChengduHuaxiTravelSchool,IspokenotonlystandardPutonghua,butalsoexcellentEnglish.IgotthefirstplaceinEnglishcompetitionlastyear.Iwasalsothewinnerofacomputercontest.InterestedinChinesehistory,geographyorculture,Ihavereadalotofaboutthem,particularthoseofChengdu.SoIkonwitsplacesofinterestlikethebackofyourhand.Inadditionto,Iworkedpart-timeasaguideforoneyearwhenatschool.Givingthejob,I'msuretomakeagoodguide.Mytelephonenumberis8432161.Hopetohearfromyousoon.

  要求改十处。

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2020-04-10 00:16
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  1.第1行fit->fitfor适合的

  2.第2行TravelSchool->TouristSchool旅游学校

  3.第3行spoke->speak现在一般时即可,表示现在的情况

  4.第4行inEnglishcompetition->intheEnglishcompetition特指加定冠词

  5.第5行alotof->alot后面没有跟名词,用alot即可

  (第6行konw是拼写输入错吧know)

  6.第7行Inadditionto->Inaddition(不要to)

  7.第7行worked->hadworked(后面有foroneyear,前面要用完成时,用过去完成时)

  8.第7行whenatschool->whenIwasatschool,要么atschool(不能说whenatschool)

  9.第7行Giving->Given(job被给予,用过去分词)

  10.第8行make->be/become(make让做,要说成为用be/become)

2020-04-10 00:20:23

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