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  【高一作文请打分.30分制第一篇:FailureIsTheMotherOFTheSucceessWemiddleschoolstudenthavehadmanytestsorexams,ASaresult,themajorityofusmightsucceedorfailinthemHowever,theattitudestowardsfailurearevaryingfromp】

  高一作文请打分.30分制

  第一篇:FailureIsTheMotherOFTheSucceess

  Wemiddleschoolstudenthavehadmanytestsorexams,ASaresult,themajorityofusmightsucceedorfailinthemHowever,theattitudestowardsfailurearevaryingfrompersontoperson.Withsortingthemout,Iputthemintotwodifferentclassifications.

  thepeoplewhofacethefailurewithpositivemoodwillencouragethemselves,andgainconfidenceonceagainsothattheycouldcorrecttheirmistakesinnotimewhichhavebeenmade.

  Onthecontrary,withnegativeattitude,theywillabandonthemselvesandlosetheirconfidence.

  Atlast,Theywillneversparenoeffortstostruggle,Inmyopinion,weshouldmaintainthefirstkind,onlyinthiswaycanwesucceedatlast!

  第二篇

  Wemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsandexams.Wehavebothachievedsuccessandsufferedfromfailure.Differentstudentsholddifferentattitudestofailure.

  Somefallinlowspiritswhentheydon'tdowellintheexams.Theyloseheartandnolongerstudyhardasbefore.

  Butmoststudentstakeanactiveattitudetowardsfailure.TheyfindoutthecausessothattheywillnotmakethesimilarmistakesIagreewiththosewithactiveattitudes.

  Asweknow,Failureisthemotherofthesuccess.evengreatmenhavefailmanytimesbeforethesucceedSowemustdealwithourmistakescorrectly.

  请打分,附细则

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2020-04-09 11:56
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黄全荣

  从高一的教学要求来看,

  第一篇24分,句子结构与语法略有些水平,但是观点阐述稍微有点不太清晰,条理略有欠缺.

  第二篇22分,虽然条理清晰,但是句子结构与用词比较单调,不容易拿高分.

  两篇作文都略有语法错误,不过尚不影响大局.

2020-04-09 11:57:52

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