高一英语文章修改IfIwereaMartian,IwouldtakepeoplefromEarthtoMarsforavisit.Iwouldshowthemthemountains,thedesert,theforest,thebeautifullakesandthefreshair.Iwouldmakethemrealizetheimportanceofprotectingth
高一英语文章修改
IfIwereaMartian,IwouldtakepeoplefromEarthtoMarsforavisit.Iwouldshowthemthemountains,thedesert,theforest,thebeautifullakesandthefreshair.Iwouldmakethemrealizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.
IfIwereaMartain,Iwouldhelppeopletodeveloptheirtechnology.Iwouldteachthemhowtomakethemostofthelimitedresourcestheyhavetolivebetterlives.Iwouldhelpthemtoproducenewspacecraftinordertoexploretheuniversewithustoo.
IfIwereaMartain,Iwouldhelppeopletolivelonglives.Iwouldtrymybesttomakethemfriendlywitheachothertoreducewarssothattherewouldbefewerpeopledie.Iwouldtakepeopletomyplanetwithmyfriendstohelppeoplesurvivethetragedyin2012.
Anyhow,IwouldmakefriendswithearthmanandturntheEarthandtheMarsmoreactiveifIwereaMartain.
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