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Thatday,Iwenttoschoolearlyandsatontheseatdidsomereading,suddenly,Iheardagirlloudlycrying:"really?"Thestudentsbegantostir.Ilookedovertherewithcuriousness.Somestudentswerearoundthecorner,andifuzzilyhearedaboytalkingaboutghosts,zombies.BecauseI'minterestinthingslikethese,Icouldn'thelptolistentohimwithothers.Theboysaidwithalowvoice:"inourvillagetherewasanoldhouse,whentheeveningcame,acryingvoicewouldbethere,andIfeltveryterriblewhenIwntacrossit."Anotherboyasked:"Sowhatdidyoudothen?"Hesaid:"Iwenthomestraight,withoutalook".Ilistenedtothestorywithacoldfeelingonmyback.Imayfogetthatinthedatlight,butmostterriblethinghappenedafterthenightclass.
Thatday,Iwenttoschoolearlyandsatontheseatdidsomereading,suddenly,Iheardagirlloudlycrying:"really?"Thestudentsbegantostir.Ilookedovertherewithcuriousness.Somestudentswerearoundthecorner,andifuzzilyhearedaboytalkingaboutghosts,zombies.BecauseI'minterestinthingslikethese,Icouldn'thelptolistentohimwithothers.Theboysaidwithalowvoice:"inourvillagetherewasanoldhouse,whentheeveningcame,acryingvoicewouldbethere,andIfeltveryterriblewhenIwntacrossit."Anotherboyasked:"Sowhatdidyoudothen?"Hesaid:"Iwenthomestraight,withoutalook".Ilistenedtothestorywithacoldfeelingonmyback.Imayfogetthatinthedatlight,butmostterriblethinghappenedafterthenightschool.
Afterschool,about9'oclock,Ihadtogohomethroughabambooforestalone.Andnotfarawayfromtheroad,therewasawood.Suddenly,Iheardsomebodycryingandwindsblowingonbambooleaves.ThenIrememberedthewordsmyclassmatessaidthatday.ImmediatelyIwenthomestraightlyinahurry,withoutstopping.
Icriedinfrontofmyhouse,becausemyfamillymayspendsometimetogetdownstairstoopenthedoorforme,itseemedlikeafewcenturiespassed.Myfamilyopenedthedoorandsawmecrying,sotheyaskedme,"whathappened?"Itoldthem,theycomfortedme:"thatwasjustthevoiceofcats,thereisnoghostsintheworld,don'tbeafraid!"Althoughnotinghappenedafterthat,however,Idarenotstayinthebambooforestagain,andafternightschlool,Ibegangobackwithmyfamillys'accompany.
That'sreallyunforgettable,evennowIwriteitdown,I'malittleafraid.Maybethat'sjustacat,orsomewhat'scrying,anythingintheworld,whoknows?