“Chinesefever”hasbeenspreadingacrosstheworldinrecentyears.Morethan30millionpeopleinothercountrieshavebeenlearningChinese.WhyhasChinesebecomesopopular?Wethinkthattherearethreereasonsforit.FirstlyChinaisacountrywithalonghistorywhichhasmadetheChineselanguagericherandmoreattractive.SecondlyChina’seconomyhasbeendevelopingveryquicklyinrecentyears.ManyoverseasbusinessmenwhowanttoentertheChinesemarketneedtounderstandChinaandtheChineseculture.MostimportantlyChinaisbecomingincreasinglyactiveininternationalaffairsandhasbecomethefocusofmanyothercountries’attention.InawordthereisnodoubtthattheChineselanguagewillbecomemoreandmorepopular.
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这是一篇针对某种现象阐述原因的文章因此文章的结构安排应为:第一部分介绍全球"汉语热"的现状;第二部分分析其成因:第三部分作总结。注意:介绍现状时一定要简单分析成因才是文章的重心所在。本文时态运用正确。句型富于变化复合句运用合理。结构清晰紧凑特别是运用FirstlySecondlyMostimportantly使原因分析层层递进层次分明且重点突出而不是平铺直叙使文章有起伏感。文章行文严谨前后照应把握住了文章重点成因分析很充分。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组:如besupposedtoononehand…ontheotherhand…beawareofsuchasfamiliarize…withinadvancesoasto等等。注重句子的连接:如asorActuallyandInadditionlastbutnotleast,句型上也是多变:ThepassagemainlytellsusthattheChinesetouristsrankedthesecondinaglobalpollofworsttravelersastheybehavedimpolitelyandimproperlywhentravellingabroad.这句话用了非谓语动词作状语,Inadditionweshouldfamiliarizeourselveswiththelocalcustomsinadvancesoastoavoidmisunderstandingsortroubles.Lastbutnotleastdoastherulesofscenicspotsrequireustodo这句话运用了目的状语从句等等。
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