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  英语作文批改谢谢thefristdayofschool.Iwasdisppointedatmyclassmates,sofromjustgottoschooluntilthebellhasrangfortheclasstheytalkingallthetime.it'srepugnanttomeevenintomyclassroom.butIkownwhatshouldtodo,w

  英语作文批改谢谢

  thefristdayofschool.Iwasdisppointedatmyclassmates,sofromjustgottoschooluntilthebellhasrangfortheclasstheytalkingallthetime.it'srepugnanttomeevenintomyclassroom.butIkownwhatshouldtodo,whatshould'ttodo.inordertochangedmylifeandfateImustkeeptoit,don'tstopuntilmystudiesfinished.thenIsatthefristrowoftheclassroom.it'sremainmewhatdidtogetherduringoursummerhoildays.

  nowwelearnedatdifferentclasses.Iholpwecansuccessfullycompletedourstudies.comeonbrother!it'scertainthatweshallsucceed!tommrrowbelongwhoisareallybraveman!Ithinkso.whataboutyou?

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2020-04-10 21:17
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蒋金华

  Todayismyfristdayofschool.

  下面表达有点混乱,不知道你的意思.

  Iwasdisppointedbymyclassmates,sincetheyarriveduntiltheschoolisfinishedtheyweretalkingallthetime.

  That'sreallyrepugnantedme,especiallyinmyclassroom.

  Ikownwhatshoulddo,whatshould't.

  Inordertochangedmylife,Imustkeeptoit,(这里的IT是指什么?表达不清.)hanginthereuntilIfinishmystudy.

  Then,Isatatthefristrowoftheclassroom.

  It'sremainmewhatdidtogetherduringoursummerhoildays.

  (它提醒了我暑假一起做的事.It's指什么?together是和谁一起,和你做第一排有什么关系?完全看不懂哪里来的这一句)

  Wenowindifferentclasses.如果说班级,用INCLASS

  Iwishbothofuscansuccessfullycompletedourstudies.

  Comeonbrother!Wecertainlywillsucceed!

  Tommrrowbelongtotherealbraveman!Ibelieveinthat!

  Soshouldyou!

  在你原文的基础上改的.修正了一些语法.

  你应该多看一些外国的小短文.了解外国人写作的习惯.

  你的句子的模式还很中国化,外国人可能很难理解.

  比如说,最后一句,我坚信,你呢?

  外国人不会这么讲,他可能会说,我坚信,你也应该相信!

2020-04-10 21:21:27

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