【求帮忙批改英语作文(1)凡事均应有信心;(2)缺乏信心的原-查字典问答网
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  【求帮忙批改英语作文(1)凡事均应有信心;(2)缺乏信心的原因;(3)建立信心是有可能的.TheimportantofconfidenceWeshouldbuildconfidenceforourselves.ifyouhaveco】

  求帮忙批改英语作文

  (1)凡事均应有信心;

  (2)缺乏信心的原因;

  (3)建立信心是有可能的.

  Theimportantofconfidence

  Weshouldbuildconfidenceforourselves.ifyouhaveconfidence,thethingswhatyoudowillbefinishedmoresmoothly.andtheproblemsalsowillbesolvedquickly.

  What’sthereasonthatpeoplelackofconfidence?ontheonehand,manypeopleareafraidofthefailuretheymakebefore.theythinkthemselveswillfailagainanddonotwanttotryagain.therefore,theirconfidencecannotbebuilt.ontheotherhand,environmentalsocaninfluencepeople’sconfidence.ifthefriendaroundyounoneofthemhavedreams.then,youaremaybelearnfromyourfriendsandalsohavenotyourowndreams.italsoaffectyourconfidence’sbuild.

  Buildingconfidenceisapossiblething.ifyoudodifficultthingsagainandagainuntilfinishallofthem.inthisprocess,yourconfidenceisbuildunconscious.

  本人英语不好,求进步,希望大家指出各种错误,谢谢.

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2020-04-11 00:51
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李培植

  thethingswhatyoudowillbefinishedmoresmoothly这句话有点冗长,不如:wewoulddothingsmoresuccessfullyandtheproblemswouldbesolvedquickly.

  What’sthereasonthatpeoplelackofconfidence改为:whypeoplewouldlackconfidence?

  第四行make要改为made.后面那个句子这样写:Theythinktheywillfailagain.

  fthefriendaroundyounoneofthemhavedreams.then,youaremaybelearnfromyourfriendsandalsohavenotyourowndreams.italsoaffectyourconfidence’sbuild.这段话你的表意有问题啊,你是想说周围的朋友没有梦想导致你也盲目自我了吧?这样改:Ifyouhaveagroupoffriendswhohavenolifegoaltoseekfor,youmayfollowtheirstepsbecominganumbpersonwhohasnoaimtofightforaswell.Thatdefinitelyaffectsbuildingupyourconfidence.

  最后一段不要写againandagain,改为:overandoveragain.最后一句这样改:Inthisprocess,yourconfidencewouldbebuiltupunconsciously.

2020-04-11 00:55:40

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