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  帮忙改篇英语作文,高考标准,30分,打个分并指出错误.Wherethereisawill,thereisawayI'mdeadkeenonthisproverbbecauseitcangivemeconfidenceandcourage.Thisisanoldproverb.whichmeansifyouwanttodosomething,yo

  帮忙改篇英语作文,高考标准,30分,打个分并指出错误.

  Wherethereisawill,thereisaway

  I'mdeadkeenonthisproverbbecauseitcangivemeconfidenceandcourage.Thisisanoldproverb.whichmeansifyouwanttodosomething,youshouldsticktoit.

  Theproverbmentionedabovevividlymirrorsafactthatawillcanchangeeverything.Inaddition,wewillsparenoeffortstohittheultimategoalduetothewill.Howimportantthewillitis

  FromwhereIstand,Ihaveawill.Myexperiencecanexplaintheproverbperfectly.Ioncefailedanimportantexamination,andIalmostlostheart.Facedwiththissituation,Ihadnoalternativebuttostudyharder.HardasItried,Ifailedagain.However,Istillbelievethatthefailureistemporaryforadeligentmanbutitispermanentforalazyman,

  Tosumup,Itisessentialforustosticktoourdream.Onlyinthiswaycanwehavearosyfuture.

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  评语:作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中衔接词丰富;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用.whichmeansifyouwanttodosomething,youshouldsticktoit.[句子错误]请检查want,确认...

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