英译中，我的翻译还可以吗?帮我修改一下，变得通熟一点谢谢

　　After turning over all the scenarios we came up with one advantage: allowing me to experience motherhood an advantage set off by a list of disadvantages: high risk of childbirth for me sagging energy that would make us pant while chasing a toddler possible financial difficulties after retirement and even the embarrassment to hear someone say “Your grandson is really cute”.把所有的情况后，我们来到了一个优势：使我体验到母爱，优势被列为我的缺点：分娩的风险高，下垂，能让我们喘而追逐一个蹒跚学步的孩子，可能的财务困难，退休之后，甚至听到有人说“尴尬你的孙子真可爱”。这样翻译可以吗